Magnitudes and tumultuous fears looking inward no answer found it is cold and lonely walling deep in the valley, you parked your car, remote, every other had gone, your life on hold, surviving on instinct. Would you become the victim of a darkened day or would you find the bright light, or is that another world. So far away and yet so within.
This is very experimental, but please consider making the subject matter a little more explicit.
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I like Mason’s work, but he needs to read through the prose to make sure that the meaning is not too oblique. Poetry is great when it teases, but if the meaning is too hard to find, then the reader will give up.